Heaven’s Hell ~*~POTW~*~ 02/03/13
Heaven’s HellPossession, obsession…no confessionLips don’t speak souls tongueInfused fear whimpers lullaby liesBroken dreamers committing carnal crimesDemons dance across fevered fleshHeaving chests...
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Very wicked fever boils over in this Rox, seducing the reader at every turn... Bravo Sweet Friend!!! *****Clapping***** Bri~
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wow, Rox........i am really really impressed!!!!........such fire in your words......*applause!!!* alexis
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passionaterider wrote:Very wicked fever boils over in this Rox, seducing the reader at every turn... Bravo Sweet Friend!!! *****Clapping***** Bri~Thanks so much Brian, this was way out of my comfort...
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draculaswoman wrote:wow, Rox........i am really really impressed!!!!........such fire in your words......*applause!!!* alexisThanks so much Alexis! *smiles*
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Rox this is a dark vision which seduces and rolls with thunder. A real masterpiece of darkness my friend. I'm very impressed. John
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nothing about this felt out of your comfort zone lovely sis Rox gave me such a ... ohh my goodness ... pause that i had to read again well done Lady Raine! well done.
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Good to see you Sis, and thanks for taking the time to wander some of my scribbles ....(((hugs)))
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There was never any doubt as to which poem I was coming back too, to Honor as Poem of the Week here in The Black Hole... Congrats Rox!!! *****Clapping***** Bri~
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Congrats indeed Rox.... adored the simplicity of that oxymoronic title very much, sure set the tone for this piece... liked your closing line almost as much...... 'Bound by the deception of being...
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~Rox~Most enjoyed this delicious little delight of darkness from your pen =) CONGRATS on your awarding sweet friend*Hugz*
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I am so sorry I didn't get in here all week to say thank you, some life stuff had me detained. Thank you all for your wonderful comments and support....and Brian, my amazing friend, thank you I am...
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Nice rhythm, it begs or demands to be read aloud and that closing verse is a home run :)
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Congrats on the award LadyRaine a very good read much enjoyed .
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LadyRaine ,Wow!!! this is a deep outstanding visual of Hell and its inhabitance !!! Grand write congrads on your award ...
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